I'm not saying I'm glad this is the end... but I'm not saying I want to see it get continued either... Mixed feelings about this 'comic'

Usually when the whole crux of the action relies on one character being attracted to another's accent and nationality, it behooves the writer to actually give said foreigner an accent, or even a single nonverbal hint of a nationality instead of insisting he has one.

GarethGobulcoque said:
Usually when the whole crux of the action relies on one character being attracted to another's accent and nationality, it behooves the writer to actually give said foreigner an accent, or even a single nonverbal hint of a nationality instead of insisting he has one.

Yes, us British don't say cunt we say twat or fanny, yes, fanny is the british word for vagina.

"hear it comes love" if a very British thing to say though.

We dont actually say yankee either, we say Yank or Septic as it's rhyming slang: septic Tank = Yank

don't try and understand why, just accept it.

GarethGobulcoque said:
Usually when the whole crux of the action relies on one character being attracted to another's accent and nationality, it behooves the writer to actually give said foreigner an accent, or even a single nonverbal hint of a nationality instead of insisting he has one.

TOP AV DA DAY GUVNAH!
Gon' take me down to da ole How's ye father?
Gon' shag that 6 n' 7 a new fanny, right I is!

Jackalovski said:
don't try and understand why, just accept it.

It makes a lot more sense than this comic does. The accent thing seems so tacked on that I wouldn't be surprised if Adonis made the whole thing and did dialogue as an afterthought. Either that, or the Doberman was originally American and the maid Hispanic, and it just came off as incredibly racist.
And for those who follow my criticism, this is what I consider bad porn dialogue: it takes sex drawn by adonis, something as majestic and fleeting as a quantum particle with tits, and makes it impossible to appreciate adequately.

If there is some sort of message trying to be put through in this...I'm not seeing it.

But OOOOHHH BOY. Dat ending. Best case scenario.

Moon_Moon said:
TOP AV DA DAY GUVNAH!
Gon' take me down to da ole How's ye father?
Gon' shag that 6 n' 7 a new fanny, right I is!

Oy, oy! Gunna go watch The Yung Wuns I is!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wk5pO06BdSk

All this tells me is that I need to travel internationally more o3o

Before you criticize the standard of dialogue in a pornographic comic, let's just set the scale: "Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum!"

securitywyrm said:
Before you criticize the standard of dialogue in a pornographic comic, let's just set the scale: "Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum!"

:) poo

His face at the end. I don't even.

securitywyrm said:
Before you criticize the standard of dialogue in a pornographic comic, let's just set the scale: "Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum!"

I'm well aware of the Brown Standard of porn dialogue. However, Cu^18m is bad writing that ruins bad art, while this is bad writing that ruins pretty damn good art. To my tastes, the latter is a worse tragedy than the former.

Please be more. :3 I love it.

GarethGobulcoque said:
I'm well aware of the Brown Standard of porn dialogue. However, Cu^18m is bad writing that ruins bad art, while this is bad writing that ruins pretty damn good art. To my tastes, the latter is a worse tragedy than the former.

cu^18m is standard for palcomix

No! Not the end! :(

yeah.. like heck that would blooming work for me as a British person.

Wait...Blitz?

wonderful comic, perfect premise for a porn completely unrealistic hot furs have unprotected casual sex after knowing each other for twelve seconds, love it^^.. totally serious too, I love a story, but sometimes fucking is just fucking

We need more.

Hehe😋

Lucky lucky boy!

dazz-senpai~ said:
I'm not saying I'm glad this is the end... but I'm not saying I want to see it get continued either... Mixed feelings about this 'comic'

same