finnick, judy hopps, and nick wilde (zootopia and etc) created by supersmurgger (artist)
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  • No one's commenting on the fact that this tries to completely subvert Nick's entire character progression through the entire movie? I mean, not only is the dialogue AIDS but the entire premise is awful and lacking creativity.

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  • Lik said:
    No one's commenting on the fact that this tries to completely subvert Nick's entire character progression through the entire movie? I mean, not only is the dialogue AIDS but the entire premise is awful and lacking creativity.

    I very earnestly believe more people would complain if they could actually piece together the flow of dialogue here.

    How often do you need a flowchart for a comic's dialogue?

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  • I think Nick is faking it. I think he make Finnick believe he's "still crooked" so that Finnick has a stable income, without any risk, since Nick got all the legal paper. I think to complete this, the "Nick's 0 declared income" is becose his "cut" is used by Nick to pay Finnick's taxes, as if he employ him, all without Finnick knowing anything, for his pride. Don't forget that it is still a world with prejudice and discrimination, of which Finnick, being a "small cute little fella", is more than sure to get is share of. And would explain why he continue to do it on the side, to make sure Finnick doesn't try anything dangerous/illegal on his own.

    That's my simple theory at least.

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  • Actinium-89 said:
    What is the author's native language? Sanskrit?
    Good lord, I feel like I need a guide for the dialogue.

    Sanskrit ain't got hoot to say about uncut!

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  • OK, so the dialoging isn't the best, but wow, way to take a dump on someones work!
    We're here for the art people, and in my view that's at least acceptable.
    Question the canon deviation, but ease up on what's probably a translation after all.
    Daddy's going for a little rest now...

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  • I think the reason the author resorted to buttering the whole page with a spread of dialogue is font size, it could be smaller and we'd see it fine, and cram more text into each box. The linework itself seems on point, though.

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