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She is a seductive snake who dreams about children...
He is a lonely bachelor rat who is unlucky in love ...

And so they found each other! They so different but both are united by love ~

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  • I really love the art and story, but the word bubble placement could use some work. Had to re-read the comic to not get a jumbled message on a few panels.

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  • HeartSoul said:
    I really love the art and story, but the word bubble placement could use some work. Had to re-read the comic to not get a jumbled message on a few panels.

    Not sure what you mean.

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  • Stavinair_Caeruleum said:
    Not sure what you mean.

    Some particular word bubbles (i.e. "...to drain them of every last drop?" And "feel better, my love? My womb surely does") lean into other panels and imply you're supposed to read them with the other panels in the general area, when in reality they go in a lightly different order. It's really minor, but the speech bubbles could've worked being shifted by just a few centimeters or so.

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