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Part 3 of my animation short I'm working on.

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  • really cool maybe slow the shirt coming off the female seemed rather rushed o3o the voices could be cleared up a tad as well but totally awesome

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  • This reminds me of a very old comic by... I think it was adam wan? Of two neighbors across buildings, showing off to one another from the window, ending with them coming over. Well, either way, very nice work.

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  • This seems far too casual for my tastes... like, not much emotion in the faces or voices... but I have no experience doing this kinda thing with strangers. So iunno... but I do know I have a stupid cocky smirk plastered on my face when I get a skype show. huehuehue

    The art /could/ use some polish too, but I feel it could be a case where it was really good as is, but then you derp hard trying to improve and end up ruining it. :I

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  • if you mute it, and focus on the animations, there is a lot to be desired. There is a lot of dead zone where neither one is moving and when he's stroking himself, his shaft is able toe remain perfectly still and his skin hardly rolls. It's kinda a bummer, really.

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  • kaseywolf said:
    really cool maybe slow the shirt coming off the female seemed rather rushed o3o the voices could be cleared up a tad as well but totally awesome

    The voices are more clear, but I added a computer fan for effect. Also I see what you mean about the shirt coming off, no idea if I can fix that because of time and timing, oh well.

    Underwolf69 said:
    Keep expecting that door behind her to open with either Mom, or insanely jealous BF/GF.

    Sadly not a part of the plot, as they are both single and living alone, don't worry, still a plot twist to come.

    AzureNightshade said:
    This reminds me of a very old comic by... I think it was adam wan? Of two neighbors across buildings, showing off to one another from the window, ending with them coming over. Well, either way, very nice work.

    I believe it was a club stripes comic by Meesh, and I as the creator thought the same thing =p
    Thanks.

    Takide said:
    This seems far too casual for my tastes... like, not much emotion in the faces or voices... but I have no experience doing this kinda thing with strangers. So iunno... but I do know I have a stupid cocky smirk plastered on my face when I get a skype show. huehuehue

    The art /could/ use some polish too, but I feel it could be a case where it was really good as is, but then you derp hard trying to improve and end up ruining it. :I

    I actually believe my anatomy work leaves much to be desired, after this animation, I intend to study more figure art, so i can get those anatomy moments more correctly.
    Also, yeah casual is more what I'm into, I think people will act more at ease over the safety of a monitor and distance.

    Daneasaur said:
    if you mute it, and focus on the animations, there is a lot to be desired. There is a lot of dead zone where neither one is moving and when he's stroking himself, his shaft is able toe remain perfectly still and his skin hardly rolls. It's kinda a bummer, really.

    Yup, this part of the animation ran longer than expected, almost twice as long. I still tried to add bits of animation here at there to fix the more dead parts, his arm flinching, his boner twitching. Because the pauses in audio felt a lot longer than they really were.
    Also I agree with the staticness opinion, and I'll try to remedy that in the next update.

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  • don't know why, but I have no sound for his videos. all other animation (both "flash" and "video") play fine for me on e621, but for some reason his don't. Other than the no sound, this looks very interesting.

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  • AzureNightshade said:
    This reminds me of a very old comic by... I think it was adam wan? Of two neighbors across buildings, showing off to one another from the window, ending with them coming over. Well, either way, very nice work.

    It was by Meesh, its called Eye Candy, you can look it up its still on the site :)

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  • A known issue is that it doesn't look realistic, but aside from that it looks actually like a nice animation and the voice acting sounds believable. I'm looking forward to see the another parts of it. :))

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  • AzureNightshade said:
    This reminds me of a very old comic by... I think it was adam wan? Of two neighbors across buildings, showing off to one another from the window, ending with them coming over. Well, either way, very nice work.

    You're thinking of Eye Candy by Meesh. One of my favorites

    Also its like looking in a mirror watching her be all hot n topless then the erection slowly rising. Very well done.

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  • FoxxJ said:
    Sadly not a part of the plot, as they are both single and living alone, don't worry, still a plot twist to come.

    She has a penis? :D

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  • pornofhalo said:
    don't know why, but I have no sound for his videos. all other animation (both "flash" and "video") play fine for me on e621, but for some reason his don't. Other than the no sound, this looks very interesting.

    I have the same issue. Maybe it's the file type?

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  • schaghticokekid said:
    Won't lie, watching him get hard while only his eyes move has been the funniest thing I've seen all day

    When I heard the audio, 3 seconds of silence felt like to much dead air. Animating an instant boner of 3 seconds looked ridiculous, so I ended prolonging it to about 10 seconds. There are about 160 frames of boner getting.

    pornofhalo said:
    don't know why, but I have no sound for his videos. all other animation (both "flash" and "video") play fine for me on e621, but for some reason his don't. Other than the no sound, this looks very interesting.

    It's an issue with mobile devices, no idea how to get around it.

    Marcheck said:
    I'd be down for more of this. :P

    3 more parts to go. And I'm contemplating on starting my own series of sorts.

    renevade said:
    this is funny .......
    FEED ME MOAR ANIMARTIONZ

    SOON SON!

    Dragonlayer said:
    i'd jump out of my seat too if I saw a yellow cock

    It's banana flavoured... I just followed the character sheet.

    BleedinSkull said:
    A known issue is that it doesn't look realistic, but aside from that it looks actually like a nice animation and the voice acting sounds believable. I'm looking forward to see the another parts of it. :))

    I'm really happy people are enjoying this. It makes me motivated to continue.

    Cloud1335 said:
    Also its like looking in a mirror watching her be all hot n topless then the erection slowly rising. Very well done.

    I'm glad people can relate to my porn...

    Havikz said:
    She has a penis? :D

    No... seriously you're the second person to say this. What is it with plot twist and dick girls around here?
    Though now I regret not going the "Guess my dick has the highest score" pulls out huge dick to which his own dick gets terrified and reverts inwards turning in to a mortified vagina... but sadly Cloud1335 would no longer be able to relate to that anymore. So I'm gonna keep it straight and simple, for now.

    EngineerWülf said:
    I have the same issue. Maybe it's the file type?

    Mobile devices have issues playing webms

    Blind_Guardian said:
    This is pretty cool, thanks for uploading here Foxxj.

    NP, I like this place and it's webm support.

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