loving it hehe wonder if hes ganna knot

Nice

Really hot comic but a couple of weird things. Benny says to slow down, then say it's time to speed up in the very next panel. In this page he tells Joshy to get on his paws and knees, but in the next page Joshy is on his back

Ethan_Bedlam said:
Really hot comic but a couple of weird things. Benny says to slow down, then say it's time to speed up in the very next panel. In this page he tells Joshy to get on his paws and knees, but in the next page Joshy is on his back

Uhh, what order are you reading?

Ethan_Bedlam said:
Really hot comic but a couple of weird things. Benny says to slow down, then say it's time to speed up in the very next panel. In this page he tells Joshy to get on his paws and knees, but in the next page Joshy is on his back

(Commissioner here)
after joshy has slowly taken all of bennys dick and gotten use to it is when benny suggestes they now speed up

the next pages panel is not meant to be what happens right after the last panel of this page, id rather not spend a whole lot of money making every panel timed within a couple seconds of each other.

TLDR: time passes between each panel

kibaru2 said:
(Commissioner here)
after joshy has slowly taken all of bennys dick and gotten use to it is when benny suggestes they now speed up

the next pages panel is not meant to be what happens right after the last panel of this page, id rather not spend a whole lot of money making every panel timed within a couple seconds of each other.

TLDR: time passes between each panel

If you need to explain what's going on then the comic is poorly paced or written awkwardly typically.

L'Ankou said:
Uhh, what order are you reading?

I'm just clicking the 'next' button

kibaru2 said:
(Commissioner here)
after joshy has slowly taken all of bennys dick and gotten use to it is when benny suggestes they now speed up

the next pages panel is not meant to be what happens right after the last panel of this page, id rather not spend a whole lot of money making every panel timed within a couple seconds of each other.

TLDR: time passes between each panel

That makes more sense. And hopefully you don't take my comments the wrong way; I absolutely love this comic!

Goombafan333 said:
If you need to explain what's going on then the comic is poorly paced or written awkwardly typically.

Hey buddy, not a professional writter or comice creator here so this is what ya get. If I have to explain things than its also because I dont have the money to make 40 pages for people who cant understand that time passes between panels. So unless youre willing to help fund this and edit all my writing for it i suggest you shut your trap and enjoy this for what it is, a nice lewd incestuous comic.

Ethan_Bedlam said:
That makes more sense. And hopefully you don't take my comments the wrong way; I absolutely love this comic!

No worries man. In glad you enjoy it!!

no point in me commenting because im so far down

this was lowkey me when i got my first bad dragon toy

kibaru2 said:

comic* can't* you're* I*
If you're going to get angry over criticism at least spell it properly. I didn't say the comic was bad, I said the pacing was a tad poor. Poor pacing alone doesn't make something bad.

Also, this quote
"So unless youre willing to help fund this and edit all my writing for it i suggest you shut your trap and enjoy this for what it is,"

Did you actually just say I should pay you or shut up because you assumed I didn't like the comic? There's not taking criticism and then there's demanding to be payed for it.

I never said I didn't like the comic, I just felt the pacing felt a tad amateurish. That's nothing to be ashamed of, we all start somewhere.

Goombafan333 said:
comic* can't* you're* I*
If you're going to get angry over criticism at least spell it properly. I didn't say the comic was bad, I said the pacing was a tad poor. Poor pacing alone doesn't make something bad.

Also, this quote
"So unless youre willing to help fund this and edit all my writing for it i suggest you shut your trap and enjoy this for what it is,"

Did you actually just say I should pay you or shut up because you assumed I didn't like the comic? There's not taking criticism and then there's demanding to be payed for it.

I never said I didn't like the comic, I just felt the pacing felt a tad amateurish. That's nothing to be ashamed of, we all start somewhere.

I think dude was basically telling you to quit your bitching and just enjoy it for what it is, and that if you want a better comic you're more than welcome to throw in on a commish next time. I assume you realized he just wrote and paid for it, he isn't the artist.