Comics are made of two things. Dialogue and Drawings.
Artists who think that porn comics only need sex to happen to be good are just clueless. There was not a single thing in this entire comic that made it worth reading.

It is strange though, for a bad artist to be better at bodies than heads. Those eyes and disappearing mouths are so bad.

TailsClock said:
Comics are made of two things. Dialogue and Drawings.
Artists who think that porn comics only need sex to happen to be good are just clueless. There was not a single thing in this entire comic that made it worth reading.

It is strange though, for a bad artist to be better at bodies than heads. Those eyes and disappearing mouths are so bad.

THANK YOU!

Even I tried to put a positive spin on things saying:

Blackphantom770 said:
Well, the art style kinda tanks but the story is interesting. The plot could be better but all in all I give it either a D+ or a C-. If the art style was better B, if the plot was better B+ if both we better I think we'd be looking at a bonafide A in the works here XD

Ultimately though you're right, though I do believe this is a good concept and would be a better comic if the dialogue and the art style didn't blow like Seasalt on an average Monday.

I don't get why people don't like the dialogue. I personally thought it was pretty good. It felt natural to me. Admittedly the translations didn't feel that way, but the original Spanish felt really on point to me at least